Reminder notice about car licence

This beauty will be familiar if you own a car. I still remember the first time I opened the envelope with one of these. 

Thanks to all that white space, my eye went straight to the circle with the instructions.

• 'Enter your plate' – I know that off by heart!

• 'and reminder number' – What's that? Oh – it's up there in bold. How convenient! 

I scanned the barcode, renewed the licence, and felt the anti-procrastination glow of a job instantly done.

Waka Kotahi, you nailed this!

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