A trimmed technical email

This rewrite is from someone on a recent workshop. It’s a powerful example of what happens – even to very technical content – when you focus on:

  • speakable language

  • bottom line up front

  • visual variety.


Thanks for inspiring me, Anonymous! 😊

 

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