Commissioning and Reviewing Writing

1 day course for managers and senior leaders

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Colleen Trolove

What it’s about

Do you commission and review other people’s writing?

Does your minister, board, or senior exec need you to:

  • brief your team members so they can produce documents

  • review and sign off those documents?

This is the course for you.

You’ll learn what ‘good writing’ looks like

You’ll see how a reader-focused approach is different from traditional writing. Structure, language, and design can work together to make any text quicker and easier to read.

Clarify your roles in the production process

Writing at work is a team sport. This workshop helps you understand your part in the process so you can add real value.

Hone your commissioning and reviewing

You’ll learn how to make work easier by giving writers:

  • a clear brief before they write

  • early feedback about coherence, accuracy, and ease of understanding.

You’ll practise giving useful, actionable feedback

You’ll give feedback that’s easy to act on and builds the confidence and ability of your writers.

What the training covers

The three pillars of reader-focused writing

  • Top-heavy structure

  • Speakable language

  • Skimmable layout

The document production process

  • Where you fit in the big picture

  • What’s your job as a commissioner and reviewer – and what isn’t

Commissioning effectively

  • What effective commissioning looks like

  • Goal, readers, context, trigger, question, logistics

  • Guided practice commissioning an upcoming piece of work

Reviewing effectively

  • Track changes versus comments

  • What’s worth commenting on?

  • What can you let go?

A method for assessing the quality of writing

  • Get clear on the goal and readers

  • Do a quick visual scan

  • Assess overall flow and logic

  • Assess the writing itself

How to give useful feedback

  • Giving feedback that someone can act on

  • Giving positive feedback without sounding fake

  • The goldilocks zone – not too much feedback; not too little

The specifics

Who’s it for?

Anyone who commissions and reviews other people’s writing at work. Up to 14 participants.

How long?

1 full day at your venue

How much?

All trainings are $8,000 + gst per day plus travel

What format?

In person or online, but not a mix of both

Before the training

You can give me document samples to use in the training (optional)

To bring on the day

  • Laptops

  • A document to review

Colleen Trolove

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