Helping parents understand kids' illnesses

KidsHealth is a fantastic plain-language resource for parents. 

It deserves its spot as a finalist in the Awards' Best Plain Language Website — Private Sector category!

Classic inverted pyramid structure

Big-picture content comes first; details later.

This means parents can skim quickly through the info to find the bits that are relevant for them. 

Source: KidsHealth webpage on Developmental Hip Dysplasia

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